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©2005-2009 ~randyrandall89
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I'd love to hear comments and constructive criticism!

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:iconth3rdeye:
oh wow, i'm surprised nobody has commented on this yet
it's really quite splendid...and you're right with the title....there's a certain stillness and isolation in the shot
i wonder how the original coloured version looks like? i'd give it a sepia/yellowish tone maybe....to preserve the "glow" of the rays

and on a separate note, i don't like your bordering, perhaps you could have a much thinner white on the inside. it's too thick and detracts attention from the shot somehow

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Death is like sunset, which is only an appearance.
For what is sunset here is sunrise beyond...
:iconrandyrandall89:
I made the mistaken of clearing photos from that year, so I no longer have the original :( The sepia is a good idea. I might try it in future in similar shots.

Bordering confuses me somewhat, I think my shots look a bit plain without but I'm never sure what thickness of what suits what. Thanks for the constructive criticism :) Appreciated.
:iconth3rdeye:
usually i work with a 0.02 inch on the inner and a 0.5 on the outer
just a thin line on the inside
of course sometimes the thick inner works with certain shots...but in this instance, it doesn't go with the soft mood you know what i mean?

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Death is like sunset, which is only an appearance.
For what is sunset here is sunrise beyond...
:iconrandyrandall89:
Yeah, it makes sense now. I might change it tommorow =) Thanks for the advice there!
:iconth3rdeye:
no problem dood :) glad to help

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Death is like sunset, which is only an appearance.
For what is sunset here is sunrise beyond...
:iconmrtom100:
Wow randall man, just looking through your gallery and came across this, its amazing and i mean it, one of the best photographs ever, it looks like a professional photograph taken with a camera costing more than most 18 year olds cars!
:iconrandyrandall89:
Finally changed the border. Any better? :)
:iconth3rdeye:
ahhh now it's perfect!! i love it

--
Death is like sunset, which is only an appearance.
For what is sunset here is sunrise beyond...

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